Wednesday, September 30, 2015









Do you have a Tinder? If you don’t, I’m sure one of your friends does! According to the apple store, “ Tinder is a fun way to connect with new and interesting people around you. Swipe right to Like or left to Pass on the people Tinder recommends. If someone likes you back, it’s a match! Chat with your matches and get to know them inside of Tinder.” I didn’t jump on board with the whole idea of Tinder right away but, I can’t lie I did create one.
So, let’s be honest, first impressions are everything and looks are what attracts us to people in the first place. That’s exactly what Tinder and other similar dating apps do for you. They take away the pain of debating if the guy you saw yesterday on campus is also interested in getting to know you. Tinder is extremely user friendly and easy to use! The person’s profile tells you their age, your common friends, as well as some of their interest, what the app doesn’t tell you however is their sexual history. Mobile dating apps such as Tinder and Grindr are changing how we interact, making casual sex as easy as ordering a pizza! Your next hook-up could easily be a few feet away…..along with your next STI! Many STIs that public health had worked hard to lower rates are now on the rise. Syphilis is just one of these STIs that have been increasing in the past couple years.
Syphilis is a highly contagious, yet curable, bacterial disease that if left untreated can cause significant complications in health. The disease is caused by the bacteria Treponema pallidum  and is transmitted through direct sexual contact, venereal syphilis, or from an infected mother to a developing fetus,congenital syphilis (French).  The STI, which infects an estimated 10-12 million new people each year is divided into four stages: primary, secondary, latent, and late syphilis.  The rate of primary and secondary syphilis decreased during the 1990’s and hit an all time low since 1941, the start of reporting (Center for Disease Control and Prevention). Although the rate of primary and secondary syphilis dramatically declined from 1990- 2000, the rate started an upward trend in 2001 (Center for Disease Control and Prevention).
Just a previously stated, syphilis is transmitted through direct sexual contact or from an infected mother to an unborn child (Center for Disease Control and Prevention).  As a result of transmission through direct contact with the sore, condoms are only useful in prevention of transmission if the sore is covered by the condom. Sores commonly occur on external genitals, lips, and in the mouth; consequently condom use is not an effective barrier. The risk of becoming infected increases with increasing sexual partners, 30- 60% of sexual contacts with early syphilis will become infected (French). The increasing rate of primary and secondary syphilis is unproportionally high among men who have sex with men (MSM) with an estimate of 64% cases attributed to MSM (Heffelfinger).
    The only way to fully prevent not only syphilis but, also other sexually transmitted infections (STI) is to abstain from sexual contact including but not limited to vaginal, anal, and oral sex (Mayo Clinic). Although abstaining from sexual contact is a sure way to avoid STIs, it is not always practical. Other more practical ways to lower the risk of becoming infected with syphilis are: having mutually monogamous sex with an uninfected person, encouraging partners to get tested, using a latex condom, and avoiding excessive drinking and recreational drugs that may lead to risky behaviors (Mayo Clinic).    

Citations
Centers for Disease Control and Prevention. The national plan to eliminate syphilis from the
United States. Atlanta: U.S. Department of Health and Human Services; 2006.
Mayo Clinic. (2014, January 2). Prevention: Syphilis. Retrieved September 27, 2015.
French, P. (2007). syphilis. BMJ: British Medical Journal,334(7585), 143-147.
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Heffelfinger JD, Swint EB, Berman SM, Weinstock HS. Trends in primary and secondary
syphilis among men who have sex with men in the United States. Am J Public Health.
2007;97:1076-83.

5 Comments:

At 10/02/2015 7:53 AM , Blogger Carrie Nelson said...

Whoa! That's so creepy! I definitely do NOT want syphilis! Thanks so much for all the great information!

 
At 10/02/2015 8:10 AM , Blogger kmm5133 said...

Yuck! I don't want t to get an STI! I'm definitely going to update my friends about how easy it is to transmit syphilis and how getting to know your partner first is imperative!

 
At 10/08/2015 11:22 AM , Blogger Elisabeth said...

Great post! this is why I refuse to get a tinder! I will wait for the right guy to come along and if I wanted to have fun, there are lots of guys on campus to meet and be friends with!

 
At 10/19/2015 11:35 AM , Blogger PW said...

I really liked your post and you are very right, apps like this make casual sex a lot easier. I feel like a lot of people are unaware of how important it is to get tested before you have sex with someone. Just because someone says they don't have any STI's doesn't mean it's true!

 
At 10/22/2015 1:18 PM , Blogger Anonymous said...

I like the comparison, "making casual sex as easy as ordering a pizza!" You're absolutely right and I hadn't thought about like that until just now.
I apologize in advance for digging in so viciously, but I think with some tweaking this could be a funny, yet informative article catered to the demographic you are clearly targeting.

This article is entirely way too personal. The post's backbone is your factual evidence. While being lighthearted to set the tone of the argument is acceptable, it turned into story-telling, which is unacceptable in this field. I did giggle, though!

The article also can't decide what it wants to be. Are you focusing on the spread of Syphillis? The casual sex phenomenon? Or how they impact each other? Half of the post is spent talking about Tinder with an immediate topic change that disrupted the flow. Writing for the general public does involve "dumbing-down," but flow is still important regardless of reading level.

Also, some people don't know what Tinder is. Opening with "Do you have a Tinder?" may immediately confuse the audience. You might add, "Do you have a Tinder account?" to clarify that you mean something on the web.

Basically, clarify your argument, definitely professionalize it a little so as to support your credibility on the topic. Otherwise, the audience may feel you aren't legitimate in your field and not take your article seriously.

You do bring up some great points about the spread of syphillis and some graphic details so people can better recognize the symptoms, which is important since this is a topic most people are uncomfortable discussing outside of the doctor's office!

 

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